Hannya Sleeve

more contrast in the cherry blossoms, more proportion in the face, spider mums are sick but layout fights itself, it's almost like you're right there, a little more study of the culture and you'd be on the right track. Cherry blossoms and spider mums , never together. the s turns in the wind should all go in one direction so they should be j curves so they don't fight the arm \ back. Looks good though and if you get rid of the tricks you'd be great, also, the wind spirals should spiral more and dive back into themselves or dive into something else. More image less back round and more contrast in your wind, too much solid mid tone makes it a bit flat